When the Universe is ready to speak, it will.
Hello Universe, Erin Entrada Kelly, 2017
Once upon a time, before every single eleven-year-old in a book seemed mandated to face off with magical creatures, wizards, ancient gods, evil governments, and/or a Chosen One Destiny, children in children’s books used to ponder cosmic questions while dealing with neighborhood bullies. Or obnoxious siblings. Or parents who gave them embarrassing nicknames. Hello Universe manages to be a novel in that classic mold, while also allowing its young heroes to ask questions about Life, the Universe, and Fate.
I came to this book already a big fan of Erin Entrada Kelly’s spectacular fantasy Lalani of the Distant Sea, which I will get around to reviewing here one of these days. (It’s SO GOOD, you guys. One of the most beautifully written middle grade fantasies I’ve ever read.) I was curious to see how Kelly writes realistic fiction. Answer: brilliantly.
the story
Hello Universe shifts points of view between four young characters. Valencia: brilliant, dealing with hearing impairment, strong-willed, and secretly lonely. Virgil: shy, awkward, outwardly lonely, best friends with his grandmother and his pet guinea pig. Kaori: confident, compassionate, a self-proclaimed mystic. Chet: an insecure bully whom you’ll want to punch in the face. All four children live in the same neighborhood. Virgil is friends with Kaori (so far he’s the only “client” for the physic business she runs out of her bedroom), he’s one of Chet’s favorite targets for bullying, and he secretly wishes he could be friends with (or maybe even middle-school date?) Valencia. Unfortunately, he’s too shy to approach Valencia.
[FROM HERE THERE BE SPOILERS. YE HAVE BEEN WARNED.]
Valencia decides to contact Kaori for dream advice after a series of recurring nightmares. On a the same day as her psychic appointment, when Virgil is heading toward Kaori’s house for his own appointment, he runs into Chet on the way. Chet, never one to resist a chance to bully Virgil, steals Virgil’s backpack and throws it down an old well — not knowing that Virgil’s beloved guinea pig, Gulliver, is in the backpack. (I hate Chet. Kelly does a great job humanizing him, and I still hate him.) From here, the story takes off: Virgil climbs down into the well to rescue his guinea pig, Valencia unknowingly traps him in the well on her way to Kaori’s house, and the rest of the novel is a race against time as Kaori, Valencia, and Kaori’s little sister Gen try to find Virgil before he runs out of oxygen and hope. Needless to say, Virgil and Valencia finally meet. AND GULLIVER IS OKAY WHICH IS WHAT REALLY MATTERS.
the babble
Just like Lalani, this book is gorgeously written – and much funnier than its immediate predecessor. These kids feel so REAL. This is a neighborhood story, set in a diverse neighborhood that feels lived-in. Kelly creates four (I would argue five, including Gen) distinct character voices, in writing that ranges from irreverent texting exchanges to poetic musings about mythical creatures of darkness.
Valencia and Virgil are well-sketched characters in the traditional middle grade fiction mode: lonely, misunderstood, far from the top of the social food chain at school, and trying to hide their suffering and angst from their respective families. I’m not the right person to pass informed judgement on such things, but it seemed to me that Valencia’s hearing impairment was treated with detailed sensitivity, and it didn’t solely define her character. Kelly establishes these two characters’ similarities enough to create the sense of fate pulling them together as potential friends, while also making them fully distinct as individuals.
It’s the other two characters who really caught my fancy. First, Chet. Like I said, I hate him — but I do sympathize with him a little bit, which means that Kelly has done her job effectively. Not many authors for this age group attempt to write from the bully’s point of view. Chet plays an integral part in this story, and rather than leave him as the common boogeyman, as most children’s novels might, Hello Universe tells at least part of the story looking at the world through Chet’s eyes. I actually wish we had gotten another chapter or two from Chet.
But now let’s talk about Kaori, because I’ve been waiting this whole blog post to talk about Kaori.
Kaori Tanaka might be one of my favorite middle grade characters of all time, and I would gladly read an entire book just about her relationship with Gen, who is also fantastic. Kelly has created such a confident point of view for this character: Kaori is the rare twelve-year-old who knows exactly who she is, feels comfortable in her skin, and can reach out to others in a sensitive way. Every single Kaori chapter is a priceless, often hilarious internal monologue. But – and this is important – Kelly never makes fun of Kaori. She celebrates her confidence and her interests. Maybe it’s Kelly’s prowess as a writer, maybe it’s because I was also obsessed with occult and psychic stuff when I was in middle school, but I adored Kaori and her pesky assistant sister from the start. I could use some advice from her “spirit room” myself, but alas, “NO ADULTS” allowed.
Basically, this novel has everything: it will make you laugh, it will make you cry, it will make you incredibly nervous for poor Virgil even as you realize this is a children’s book so of course he’s probably going to be fine. Highly recommend.
rating
**** out of 4
RANDOM BABBLE
- Like most bullies with backstory, Chet seems to have daddy issues. But I appreciate that Kelly paints the father as a powerful business man, someone who enjoys using his privilege to punch down then invites Chet in on the joke. We get to see Chet grapple with his discomfort in these situations, while imitating it later.
- I love the various characters’ personal treasures — Kaori’s spirit stones, Valenica’s wildlife journal, Gen’s jump rope.
- Kelly uses third person past tense for chapters from Virgil’s, Kaori’s, and Chet’s points of view, while using first person present tense for Valencia chapters. That’s so fascinating. I have some guesses why, but haven’t fully puzzled it out yet. What do you think?